Jo3yb0i's Fanfic Teaser

[Jo3yb0i]

This teaser is mainly to intimidate my opponents in the upcoming fanfic contest and well for the entertainment of you guys. Anywhoooo, enjoy =P

Once upon a time there is this boy named Aldon. He is a traveler and he is originally from Layar. He travels various lands in order to visit various Smith Shop and talk with their Master Smith. He is looking a for a weapon so great that can make him invincible.

One day he passed by an uprooted tree lying down in the middle of the road. Trapped underneath is this hot girl who has a great rack and some nice jASSmines. So Aldon helped her out, she was very grateful. "Thanks for everything. How can I ever repay you? I can do anything" she said. "Anything?" Aldon replied with a great idea on his head. So they head out to the nearest city and go inside the nearest inn.

To cut a long story short, she was doing a rejuvenating ritual upon his rusty longsword while all he can see is say is "Now You're mine" while he Smites her with his wooden staff. They spent the night together. When she woke up, he was gone and her snow snapphire feels like its in engulfing flames.

9 months later little Blake is born.

[SamuelJ]

This seems like a Disney movie gone wrong.

[Unruler]

Quite a slow start, but it gets better as plot thickens, erecting moral questions, 8/10.

[Preybird]

Shit, we're all done for. No chance of beating that.