Loving the cards!
I'm going to turn this post into a small list of small mistakes I've noticed to help the design team out.
1. Series text on the bottom of Alert and Able says 'Expansion' not 'Prophecies'.
2. I feel the URLs for the card images should be http://www.shadowera.com/cards/pr031.jpg instead of http://www.shadowera.com/cards/ex031.jpg to avoid confusion next expansion.
3. Alert and Able also doesn't show up in the forums. A bunch of the new cards don't actually.
4. Lythite Coating is written as Lythite on the card list.
5. Wording for Devouted Lightbearer:
Current
Your 5 cost or more allies cost 1 less to summon. While Devoted Lightbearer bears an attachment he has steadfast.
Suggested
"Your allies with cost 5 or more cost 1 less to summon. While... steadfast."
or
"Friendly allies with cost 5 or more cost 1 less to summon. While... steadfast."
6. Name Wording for Infinity Core:
Suggested
"Infinite Core" - Infinity isn't an adjective so it doesn't make sense as a descriptive word; reminds me of the way young children describe things. 'Infinity' is a number so it would be equivalent to having the card called "2 Core" whereas using the word 'Infinite' is equivalent to calling the card "Dual Core". I must admit I groaned painfully when I saw a card named Infinity Core.
7. Zantonite's ability seems really forced while still trying to be open. Why not just say "...is unaffected by Shard of Power" instead of leaving it open to future cards? Or perhaps say that he's "unaffected by Shards" instead of
"...cards with the word shard in their name".
Personal Thought: Rejuvenating Ritual seems overpowered. It basically gives every human the defensive part of Jericho's ability for 1 cost.
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